The Billionaire Writer's Secret
by: Steven Barnes
During a career spanning twenty-five years of novel, film, and television
work, I've two major tools most valuable: the yogic “chakras” for
characterization, and Joseph Campbell’s model of the Hero’s Journey for plot
structure.
These are not random choices, nor were they selected because of the many
intelligent and thoughtful essays on their relationship to successful film or
world myth.
Rather, they are important because they create a connection between the inner
world of the writer, and the external world of the finished work—and the reader.
A plot structure is nothing more than a tool for organizing events in
temporal sequence. While there are more such structures than there are
professional writers, few of them meet what thousands of students consider a
critical test: are they actually easy to use and apply? A simple tool, however
limited, can be of greater use than a complicated tool that requires years to
master. Remember: you will achieve real quality in your writing only by
mastering your basics.
The Hero’s Journey, extracted from thousands of years of world mythology, has
the advantage of actually mimicking the path of life itself. The “three act
structure” does not. After all…life isn’t divided into three, or five, or eight
acts. Such divisions can be useful tools, but they should never be mistaken for
some kind of “truth” about existence. In comparison, note this interpretation
(there are others) of the steps of the Hero’s Journey, and to explain them,
we’ll look at the first Star Wars movie, “Episode IV, A New Hope”:
1) Hero Confronted With A Challenge. “Come with me, Luke, learn the ways of
the Force.” This is pretty clear, right? There has to be a challenge, or a
beckoning, or the character won’t begin to change—and all great writing is about
change.
2) Hero Initially rejects the challenge, :I promised Uncle Owen I’d work on
the moisture evaporators.” A real challenge, one that can provoke real change,
will be frightening and exciting. A character will usually have some
reservations.
3) Hero accepts the challenge. Luke’s aunt and uncle are killed, freeing him
from his oath. If your character doesn’t accept the challenge, there is no
story—unless the story is about the consequences of not accepting
responsibility.
4) The Road of trials. Traveling to the desert town and cantina, getting on
Han Solo’s spaceship, traveling to other planets, etc. This is the section where
locations and sequence interact. The character travels, learns, commits actions
that force inter-action with the environment, and the environment responds
positively or negatively, with greater and greater stakes as the story proceeds.
5) Gaining Allies and Powers. Luke meets Han Solo, and Chewbacca, and
Obi-Wan, and Princess Leia. He learns of the Force, and the use of Light Sabers,
and how to fly and fight and rescue princesses. If your character doesn’t have
to grow in order to resolve the problem, you may have chosen the wrong problem
or character!
6) Initial Confrontation with Evil, and defeat. Obi-Wan’s death. Or possibly
the disastrous attack on the Death Star. One is private and emotional, the other
spectacular and physical.
7) Dark Night of the Soul. The moment of greatest weakness. Luke begins to
believe he cannot win, and everything he loves will die.
8) Leap of Faith. “Trust your Feelings, Luke.” The leap of Faith is always
faith in one of three things: faith in self, faith in your companions, or faith
in a higher power. In “Star Wars” it is all three! This may be the only time in
the history of cinema that this was true, and helps to explain why George Lucas
is a billionaire.
9) Confront Evil—victorious. The Death Star blows up.
10) Student Becomes the Teacher. Luke is presented with medals, which
establish him as a role model.
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The above ten steps are not some cookie-cutter pattern. They are the combined
world wisdom about the path of life itself, the process we go through in
achieving any worthwhile goal. There will be fear. There will be defeat. We will
need to gain new skills and friends and partners. We must be clear on our
acceptance of goals and responsibility. We must have faith. And ultimately, if
we have struggled, and learned, and sacrificed, and moved through our fear…we
learn and grow and succeed. And then we teach others. This is the pattern of
life, and any time you organize information and events into a pattern even
vaguely reminiscent of this, the human nervous system, worldwide, will recognize
it as story.
It is NOT some kind of cure-all for bad story tellers. What these ten steps
are is something analogous to the eighty-eight keys of a piano. Understand the
emotional and life significance of each step, and then “play them” as your
developed instincts dictate. Make your own kind of music. The pattern has worked
for about thirty thousand years. It will work for you, too.
About The Author
NY Times Bestselling writer Steven Barnes has published over three
million words of fiction, and wrote the Emmy-Winning "A Stitch In Time"
episode of the Outer Limits. He is the creator of Lifewriting, the first
body-mind high-performance system for writers. Get a free daily Lifewriting
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